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Awww...Pengy...David...after that effort I think my parents would be impressed...
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Hig
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I'm sure you're not wanting critque, but oh well.
 where teens advise each other on the problems and issues that they face in this often challenging years on the road to adulthood. 
where teens advise each other on the problems and issues that they face in these often challenging years on the road to adulthood. ... or something. Also, this is one hellalong run-on sentence.
We provide several options for seeking support, including the forums, resources (lists of informational websites for teens), the Serious Forum, which is a forum where only users who have a strong background of giving honest advice, who are called Support Leaders, can reply, and eHelp, where problem solving suggestions from Support Leaders and Moderators is almost instantaneous and can be absolutely anonymous.
Break it up or something.
We provide several options for seeking support. The forums offer a broad range of topics covering everything from homework help to technical questions to ways of dealing with friends and family. The Resources list is a directory of various informational websites for teens that deal with issues such as abuse, suicide and depression. The Serious Forum allows members to ask for advice and receive helpful suggestions and support from our Support Leaders who are members that have a strong history of giving beneficial advice. There is also eHelp where teens can anonymously ask questions and receive problem solving suggestions from Support Leaders and Moderators almost instantaneously. I dunno. Just an idea. The long sentence got me confused. It was really hard to follow.
Anyway, the letter is ok. I'd never show it to my mom, but that's ok. Not because it's shitty, I just know she wouldn't approve of LW. Also. I think this sentence sucks: We believe that if every teen who frequented an online community switched to LiveWire the internet would be a safer place for teenagers. It's so egotistical. And unless you're Ryan or Jared, Egotism = lame.
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Bravo, bravo.
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DATS NOT HER IN DA PIC.
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I don't think my mom would approve. It would go something like this, "Omg, you're talking to people you don't know....over the interent???"
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sasha7
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i'm saving that. my parents hate this sorta thing. If the issue ever comes Up I'm showing them that letter. that does help. thanks a bunch
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HyFa3
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Yes, I now see what you mean 
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ckings6056
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my parents dont even know that i use LW! lol.... i dont give a shit what htey think about it anyway they wouldnt stop me from using it!!
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upto my eyes and i'm seeing without you,
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Good idea and well done!!
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though, I think the image is to wide for most printers making the text get cut off the page. In other words, the html page isn't printer friendly.
