you have many gramatical/spelling errors.
1. its FERTILIZER.
2. we write papers differend, I can tell by the formatting. like, the way you cite things is totally different.
3. I don't know your main objective.
4. no personal opinions should be used in a paper.
5. introduction?!?
6. wikipedia IS NOT a credible source. maybe use an actual dictionary?
7. get some textual support. your text book, PRINTED MATERIALS! newspapers, magazines....BOOKS!!! websites are not as credible. for all you know it could be some 8 year old making up stuff and making a website.
let me know if this helps. this is how I would BEGIN to look at your paper.
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