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In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence" that because good cannot exist without evil God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good.


should there be a "," after evil and before God?

as in


In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence" that because good cannot exist without evil, God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good.

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also is it correct to use "that" after "Evil and Omnipotence"? or should I use "on"

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Quote: from iinsurgent at 5:57 pm on Sep. 8, 2008
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Quote: from Black American Dude at 5:57 pm on Sep. 8, 2008
also is it correct to use "that" after "Evil and Omnipotence"? or should I use "on"

The whole "that" was a bit confusing.  It's a little bump in the sentence.

But I think your comma is in the right place.

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the entire statement kind of looks a mess to me, but the comma should be there.
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is this better?

In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise: because good cannot exist without evil God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good, in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence."

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If it were me It would go as;
In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise which suggests that because good cannot exist without evil, God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good, as written in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence".


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